Hello ! all the ideas of the perfect places are actually very good and are in favor of the welfare of life in community by all entities or establishments that located around the school
Goodnight These types of drawings are very important because they contribute to the welfare of society, but it would be a good idea to add text to expand more the information
good morning all these places show the model of a prosperous city counting on aspects of sustainability for environmental care with places of interest and help for its citizens all are very good ideas that make good Union and give good results
Good morning, these drawings of an ideal city in addition to being very well designed show how in the future, when it is our turn to take care of our parks and our environment, we can make decisions like using wind technology to protect our environment and help it to be more prosperous , I would like them to have more environmental points, such as wetlands, etc. Thank you very much. Catalina Martínez - 10 °
I think it's good that we started thinking about taking care of the environment and what better way to build a sustainable city but we have to improve and think that everything we contribute to the city complement. Maria Fernanda Gómez Aldana 10°
Good morning for me the presentations are quite interesting because we can see how young people want to improve the world more viable than adults, but we must extend our ideals a little bit more. Camila López 10°
Map #1 Description: (Rojas Mariana, Castillo Klaus, Covezdy Ashley, Gonzalaez Dahian) In the Central Park there are many trees, it has garbage trashes, and there is also a lake with ducks. The park is important because it is ecological. On the roof of each house a solar panel will be installed in each house. This is important on the map because it helps to avoid the use of much electrical energy. In the hospital there is fast and good attention, healthy food many stretchers and waiting chairs It is important because people get sick and if there is no hospital or health center, how they would be cured. Finally, in the school they would have many recycling companies; there will be good refreshment for children and they learn important habits such as recycling. If I am president, I will create a sustainable place. If I had the power of the government, I could give a good ideas to the citizens.
Guess: we are located in protection of animals, crossing the street in front we find the underground subway station, turn to see left and continue right, then turn right and continue straight ahead, we find the hospital, which it is on the right, on the left is the central park, we move a little further and turn left we continue straight, on the right we find the shopping center and continue on, cross the street, where do we get to?
I think they did a good job with the design of the map, what I would add would be a better description of their sustainable place that contains higher quality. On the part of the riddle, the place you want to go to is the school, I would add names to your streets and avenues so you can better understand where you have to go, but everything else is very good.
I think it was a point in favor to have used water as a source of energy, electric cars and several points of interest and help to the community in general
the indications for my is a very bad do .i see of the destination end is the school the map is good but fall river of other thing ande the describption is a good but have a prolbme orthography . i think that the work is a regular and they can do a best work
This idea is very good only that it is not very well written, but in the rest it is fine but simple. The solution to the place they want to go to is the school. Alejandro Moreno 10 °
You should correct as you write as it is not logical that the Central Park has base of the garbage, you should leave the Central Park has garbage because it helps us to take care of the environment, secondly it is not logical to say that you will put solar panels in each, Secondly it is not logical to say that you will put solar panels in each house if there are no houses on the map, and finally the answer to your question is that you get to school.
the description of the map is understandable and also the location of those who made the map know how to give directions and I really liked the map because it is very clear, and it is the right place to live
the description of the map is understandable and also the location of those who made the map know how to give directions and I really liked the map because it is very clear, and it is the right place to live
I liked the map very much, the idea is very interesting, it highlights many environmental values, besides highlighting the great importance for life in terms of health, besides that it also reflects the importance of studying in the school and the library. I liked the description of the map, I think that the implementation of recycling in schools is very important because it creates an awareness in students to improve environmental problems.
I think they should implement more environmental spaces such as parks or environmental centers where they can plant plants for the increase of the environment or biodivercidad. In general, I would like to live in your city, I find it attractive and it is very sustainable to live there.
I would not live in this city because there is nowhere to live or there is no urbanization, there can be a variety of trade and the essentials but if there is no where to sleep I would not live there
It seems to me an interesting proposal, both ecological and at the same time economic to a future. I think the part of the space is well located, the hydroelectric plant seems a very sustainable idea to generate energy to the citizens of a certain place. the only thing that suggested you is that you will review your writing at the time of writing, as in the case of the word "house" being redundant.
I think the idea is very good and interesting, I like that there is a hydroelectric plant that supplies renewable energy to the whole "city". From my point of view it is smart to put a green area or park in the center of the city not only for the aesthetic but also for the advantages it brings to the citizens. Another fact that pleases me is the fact that this place uses solar energy in linking of electric energy that we know.
I think the guess is very good and simple, you are located in the school, very interesting your map and great, I really like the way you did your map and your creativity, but it should be a bit more complicated with more twists and turns. I suggest you improve your spelling
Well, I liked that map, it had good places and good structure but I realize that It has a lot of repetition, anyway I hope that you can improve in the future :)
The map 1 is very well drawn the description is well written to the point where it indicates that each house will have a solar panel on the roof but the map does not see any normal house which presents a certain confusion between the text and the graphic everything else is fine;The riddle with the indications they give us sends to the school
On the map you will find strategic and very important places whitin a city, in the description they talk about some houses with solar panels but you can not see them on the map it would be good if they can see in general is a sustainable place it is a good map only the houses are missing. Good job My answer for the riddle is ; The school
I think that it is a good place to live because it has a good structure this emphasizes in the environmental care because this have a electric car station, hydroelectric and a site of animal protection.
If i could, i will remove the store because next to it there are a mall and this have a lot to stores, and i´will remove the church because in this times is more important a scientific research center.
observing the map and following the instructions, the school was reached. Regarding your project is very well prepared but I think that when giving indications it should be more clear and precise. Maria Fernanda Gómez Aldana 10°
Map #1 i think that this park is good and organized, because everything is very important, it´s necessary the things he has,like the animal protection, or the hospital for the people.
i would like the library to be bigger because i really like read, and not only me, the other people when go to the libraly needed more space to read.
Map #1: On the map you can see a very good location, good places to live "well", I found it very interesting about the solar panels and the protection of animals since all this idealization is taking us more and more to what we really want like that ideal world that we all dream of. Regarding the text and the description, it could have been a little clearer, some descriptions do not have a good wording and you do not have a bit of meaning to some things, improve that, the rest very well.
The activity of the riddle is very interesting, the place where they were is: the school.
MAP #1: The organization of the map is very well and have places that is indispensable for the city. In the ubication is importantin highlight that not good idea place a hidrohelectric next to of the school. Also is necesary that in the map be seen the things that they find in the description, but in general is a good job
This group has very good ideas to achieve an ideal society and planet. Regarding the graphic I think that they lacked being more explicit, because they do not show the solar panels, the trash cans and if they only show the drawing it would not be seen as an ideal place.
The answer of the guess is : They errive at school .
Hi I agree with the idea that I like the distribution of the map, it is very good, I suppose I think it has a good wording and I think what could improve it could be a different mechanism for our advance and maintenance in the future and help to the environment and the planet for the future of the human population. ANGELA GUIO 11°
Well, I liked that map, it had good places and good structure but I see that the indications are not very good to get to the place and they are very tangled, but what I can tell you more or less is that you can get to school .
Hello ! The perfect place is fine, but the instructions are very complicated when the answer is in the last part. he arrives at the school, across the street, from what he says there is
¡Hello¡, the idea is very good but it should be more concrete, a little bit of writing more in line, in the same way very good work. in solution to the trivia, according to the indications they would arrive at the school.bit of writing more in line, according to the indications they would arrive at the school. Angela Peñate 9 Grade
Map #2 DESCRIPTION: In the center of our sector is the solar system, on the right, crossing the 32 avenue is the Nestor Forero school, one block above is the police station, and below the school is the public urbanization , following the 12 street is the garbage treatment plant, and by the same street and crossing the 23 avenue is the university. At the end, the public forest, and straight following the 12 Street is the food center. Trivia: Today I will go to the supermarket, from there I will go to greet some friends in the police next door. I have to get to meet my friends in the place, which is passing by the south of the school and going east through the hospital. Do you know what place it is? (By Garcia Luisa, Sanagria Cesar . Gutierrez Laura and Suarez Carlos)
good job. with good drawings and good map, but it is recommended to put the streets and avenues with their names since in the description they are but in the map noy
in the second map is not so clear because it looks very close to everything, they lack more order and location and environmental spaces, the rest is well the description of the map is what they need is to locate the places better
First of all in the tracks should be more coherent since they are not very logical the tracks to part of that are very tangled to understand them and one is lost when to solve the tracks where we arrived, but however one can understand little , you should practice a little more reaction in order to understand it and the answer to the ultimate is that you get to college
the map is very basic, very common. I think the ideas are very good, but they should be a bit more creative and create a more environmental and urban city with more striking sectors. In general, it's not a bad idea, but I think the ideas are not very specific.
In my opinion, they should create more green plants and fewer plants, implement values such as respect for the land, plants and animals, and be more aware of what people would like to have in a city.
Personally I would live there since there is an urbanization and it is the essential thing, but it needs a place of pets, besides it is badly written: It is not "vegetable waste treatment" if it is "garbage treatment plant"
I do not think it is a proposal that is very related to the ecological or environmental, since I only see a green area. in the part of the track I would suggest that you had a little more consistency at the time of writing, the rest is very good.
I think it's a really interesting map, it's easy to understand and it covers a wide variety of different facilities. From my point of view, it is very good, useful and intelligent to add a plant for the treatment of water and a plant for the specialized treatment of waste. I also like that the design of the map revolves around the hospital, that is, that the hospital for its usefulness is the center from my point of view the only regular thing is that you do not know the roads very well, it would be better to make a small change in the sizes and make it more realistic, the rest is perfect.
the map has good sustainability elements but it would be good if you also had the streets and avenues to make it more complete Maria Fernanda Gómez Aldana 10°
Goodnight I think the map has a good presentation but should put streets and avenues since the map is not highlighted cardinal points and so it would be easier to locate.
Map #2 I think this map is very basic, you can understand things more easily, that's true, but I think it lacks more color, more life, more beautiful things to do in this place,more green,and coherent directions, that are not written.
Besides all these things, the rest can be easier to understand, unlike many maps, since there is almost no creativity.
Map #2: the description of the map with the image does not match very well, it makes sense some things or coherence with what is describing and the image, could improve that. Something very good that I did not see in the previous map is the urbanization, the houses, buildings and others, which makes it a much better place to live. I like to highlight the environment because without it we could not live.
you could add it to your "city" shopping center or places for the care of animals, as veterinarians, it is the only thing that would be missing, the rest is fine, I liked it.
Good job. with good drawings and good map, but it is recommended to put the streets and avenues with their names since in the description they are but in the map no, and is important to get better the orthography in the description and in the trivia
It is a good drawing but it is not complete. Missing street names, drawing roads and not describing an ideal place. I would recommend that you try to go deeper into the drawing and use more the imagination.
The answer of the trivia is : They are in the university Sara Moncada 11°
Hi I really like this map it seems to have good potential but maybe it is necessary to polish some insignificant things but if important I think that they should improve the way they explain things in the description something more descriptive. ANGELA GUIO 11°
I like this map but I think it lacks signage and it is not clear which streets and avenues I think the map is very simple. The answer is : Garbage treatment plant
I liked your map, very didactic and very good the riddle, but you should improve a little more the city, the environment, but you should add more things, like a river, that is not so industrial
hello, interesting your work very well, but the map does not have the cardinal points nor the directions mentioned in the trivia, just that observation.
I do not think it is a proposal that is very related to the ecological or environmental, since I only see a green area. in the part of the track I would suggest that you had a little more consistency at the time of writing, the rest is very good.
Hello ! friends the description is wrong because it names a logar that does not exist and guesses it also because it is relative is not concrete because it is where we want to see the south or the west through a person and if it is through the place I do not block greetings! if it were west it would be the university
Well the map is very good and only has one error in the description that says "In the center of our sector is the solar system" and obviously there is no solar system, others are very happy. Answer: University.
the first map seems good because it has great sustainability but I think that being an ideal place there should be no aggression to the animals and therefore there would not be a center of protection since there would be no...
in the second map it seems to me that it was a great idea but for the same reason, if it is a sustainable place, the garbage appears in the water and it seems that something is needed to get the food like a farm orchard or something similar
MaP #3 DESCRIPTION In the center of my perfect city is located a wetland where there is a large number of species and it is used as a water accumulation zone avoiding flooding. To the north of the wetland there are houses and buildings with large windows to let natural light in and avoiding the consumption of energy. On the left is the school where they teach the importance of recycling and caring the environment. In front of the school there is a store sale of bicycles which help to reduce levels of contamination of air and environment. To the left, there are crops of fruits and vegetables where you do not use pesticides or herbicides for your crops and will not contribute the contamination to air and water to the left of the crops there is a store so that in houses and stores it is counted and regulated the consumption of water. Next to, is the classification of trash that prevents soil contamination and does not produce and die plants and animals in front is the stationery that helps us recycle and finally to the left of the stationery is a park with many trees that purify the air, absorbs carbon dioxide and protects the soil from erosion. If I could made my own city, I would favor the environment and If I go to the sale of bicycles, I will find bicycles that help the environment. Yesterday my friends Lucia Fonseca, Maria Fernanda Gomez and Camila Lopez and I were in a place ¡GUESS WHERE! We take following indications: First were in the school and decided to go to the place, in front of the school is a sale of bicycles, we crossed the Avenue 24 and we arrived at the Wetland and across the Street Fire to the east crossing the Avenue 36 is the Trash Classification, in front was the house of a friend, we went up to take a juice and when going down we crossed by the Street LM and then by the Avenue 48 to arrive at the Stationery and finally to cross by the Street 76 to arrive at our destiny.
I think a good city because it is very ecological to the health of all who lived in it preventing many diseases in our body, is a very, perhaps and the best thing is to improve a bit the wording or suddenly more fixed in the mistakes that makes the Translator because although it is understood it produces a bit of confusion, with some words out of context, but I think it is a very good idea.
On the other hand the answer to the place that is reached is to the park
I liked the map, it is very original and creative, it has many environmental complements that are very ecological and good for the environment. It is a very equitable city and highlights many values that emphasize the care and protection of nature.
Without a doubt, living in this city is a good proposal, because it is a very pleasant and peaceful place to live.
In my opinion it seems to me that the ecological infrastructural part is well formed, has very good ideas to prevent pollution, and other ecological factors. There is also something to recognize is that it avoids the use of electronic energy, like the advantage of placing large windows. also in the health aspect as the use of bicycles for a better physical condition and avoid the use of cars. I really liked this urbanization proposal.
I find this map really interesting and really impressive. I have to repeat again that it is impressive because I think it is very well thought out, not only the general location of everything, but also the size of each installation is proportional to its importance and the size they would have in reality. from my point of view it complies with everything to be a perfect city, (it has a waste treatment plant, a park, a large green area, a school, the normal urbanization, etc.); I very much agree with the addition of a cultivation field and a huge bicycle shop with the objective of helping the environment, the only thing is that if there is a large bicycle shop there must also be a large "bicycle parking lot", I just think that's missing, -the rest is perfect and I definitely would like to live in this city.
Goodnight The ideas of sustainability in this city are quite good and interesting because if such a city existed it would be where we would all like to live As for the presentation, it seems to me that it is very clear and very pleasing to the eye
I think this is the best map,i do not know where to start, it has an incredible organization and creativity, they are very aware of the environmental, they care a lot about caring, recycle, and save in every way, the people who created this map thought of absolutely everything that is needed. in a city truly, being so creative and coherent in every way. They thought about the need for the environmental and how they could help by converting useful things to improve the quality of life.
Map #3: Living in this city catches my attention because they focus a lot on the ecology, on the environment, that gives me to understand how very important the environment is for this city, they focus a lot on this and that it makes it a nice and cozy place, it has everything to live very quiet. It is definitely a perfect city.
MAP #3: i think is very well the size of each part of the city, is proportional to its importance. Also is important highlight that the ubication of the elemts of the city is very good made and in a sustainable way, although missing places indispencible in a city
This map is excellent. I believe that it has all the requirements to create an ideal place, where the biodiversity, care and quality of each natural installation is reflected. They use imagination and fantasy a lot and that is very important for a generation which should be in charge of caring and forming an ideal world.
Hi I like this map I like the idea of having areas of fauna and flora like the wetland that is in the center of the city I like that it has a way of looking for saving energy and consumption to use only what is necessary, taking advantage of the day and enjoying the night in its nature has great initiative I think it could serve to help a have a healthy future and maybe recover extinct species or at least improve the lives of all inhabitants. I like that it recycles that looks for the way to educate people so that they can recycle and be aware of the damage caused by not doing so.
I liked your map, very didactic and very good guess, but you should improve the city a bit more, and you should have an order for the letters of the buildings, so that you can read more easily
Goodnight. excellent work, very well developed colleagues very easy to understand clearly enough that creates interest in the, very good work. According to the indications, they would arrive at the park.
¡Hello¡ I Think That East Map Has The Requirements To create An Ideal Place, Don of There is Many Biological Diversity Since This Is Too important For The World, I Like The Description Since It Is Clear And Concise, It is Very natural And Essential. Angela Peñate 9 Grade .
Map # 4. DESCRIPTION: The river cross all the city, it has a purifier so you obtain clean water. The hydroelectric installation is the place to create electricity through water. There are 4 principal avenues, 2 streets and 2 carrers too. There is a school: Néstor Forero Alcalá for secondary and primary students. Quitian Church is a place where the people come to redeem and convert themselves. Also there are some houses for the families and a commercial zone: The Eden, where you can sale a lot of things. In the park the kids play and there are some shops for sale less things. Finally, there is a pool for refreshing when it is warmer. If the hydroelectric installation broke, we could die. And the pool will dry, if the sun shines a lot. Trivia: I was to the pool, I cross the street 1, I was in the Quitian church and to the south I cross the carrer 2, where I am? (Nicolas Quitian, Giovanny Manrique, Duvan Lis and Nicolas Garcia)
It seems to me that you have the idea of making an ecological city, but there is something that I would recommend as the writing, there are parts in which one can be confused as the moment you finish the description. As you say it is a place that is hot I would recommend that you put solar panels in the school and in the houses and thus you would have more ecology contribution.
It is a good proposal but I think they should have added more things related to the environment such as parks, hospitals and schools that encourage more than sports.
it is very reflected the importance for the citizens who live there and there is a lot of respect for water and that is very important because it highlights a very good job.
I think it seems a good city, very easy to understand others that there is good wording and would be a good future city, but you should correct some errors in the translation of some words such as "career" that translated something wrong as it says "career "Instead of saying run that symbolizes career of an address or avenue, because carer refers more than everything to a profession, I find it very good writing and creativity to think of an ideal city The answer to the question is that you get to the community
It is a good map. I think it's really interesting that the design of this city is based around water, that is, that the central structure of the city is based on following the river as it was in ancient architecture. It is intelligent to take advantage of the passage of the river to obtain energy from it with the hydroelectric plant. something to highlight this map unlike the previous ones is that it has a pool, which, although it seems simple, means that the city, besides being friendly with the environment, besides worrying about the utility, also worries about the entertainment of its citizens all because the life of the people are not routine and that is something important in reality and that is good to implement in a city.
I think I liked this map but I think it lacks a bit of organization and creativity, more conscience for the plants, it's a very good idea when talking about : " The hydroelectric installation is the place to create electricity through water".I think it's really interesting, but I think it's lacked more life.
The answer of the trivia: You get to the community.
Map #4: I like it, just that you should add a park or something with a green area due to the great importance that you have of the environment, remove the pool and put the park as it is much more primordial. I like the water purifier because in this way we would get clean and healthy water for the human being.
MAP #4: Is a map interesting and have an good organization, but lack much creativity and objectivity for an city that really be sustainable. Although have good ideas as get energy for through of the water, have to give importance to elements that are need for have an city sustainable
The answer of the trivia: the nestor forero alcala
In my opinion it is a map with good intentions, where they give to understand the integrity of a partnership, but it would be very good to give it more color because it is off and does not attract attention. The idea of the river is very good because it satisfies a life healthy and permanence.
I liked your map, very didactic and very good guess, but you should improve the city a bit more, and you should have an order for the letters of the buildings, so that you can read more easily, and put the river around the city and not from
Hello, in my opinion and with all due respect the map is a bit opaque, lack of commitment in the organization and dedication to the part of creativity and design, in the same way all very well, good work.
Hello I think that his description is interesting, but I do not like me the style of the map as for colors and local locations it should improve a bit Answer : You get to the community. Angela Peñate 9°
Map # 5: In our sustainable place we decided to have a dam to work as a source of energy, since we have a large park with a hydroelectric plant accompanied by a farm which gives us the big part of food to support the inhabitants, we have a distributor and donor company , it helps us to distribute all the producers both internal and external and the visitors can bring clothes or furniture that they no longer use in good condition to donate them, we have a medical center, a police station and a large school with green bells and a shopping center for to be able to have sustainability and jobs. Our homes and apartments have solar panels to create their own energy with small stores. Finally, we have our garbage dump which is friendly to the environment because it separates all the recycling and burns the garbage from specialized places which treats the air so that it does not contaminate. If we burn the garbage and recycle the steam with turbines we can generate energy, and we will help the planet more. Also, if I use solar energy, I will take more care of the environment and save more money. Guess: This morning we stayed with my friends, I left my house and I crossed 96th Street to meet one of my friends to go together. She lives in a group of apartments, then we crossed in front of the hospital, we went through the farm to see the animals, then we went through the park, at the top we crossed by the May 17 Avenue, we passed the police station and arrived. The trash can is on top of us. Where we are? (By Maria Paula Lara, Alejandro Moreno and Santiago Mora)
it's a good job In my opinion, I think it's a very elaborate map, it has everything a sustainable city requires, I like it because it reflects the importance of life and the respect it should have.
It is seen that there are many places for people with problems and that is very good as well as the implementation of environmental resources. It is a city that would undoubtedly live there.
I think it's a very good idea, it's a good city apart from that there is a lot of creativity you can see the effort of the group and teamwork, besides it is a good city in the part of that was thought of everything, in the distribution companies , recyclers, on farms that serve as a great help to maintain the city with regard to food, I also find it good the mall to generate the employment of citizens as well as other companies;I think they should put a little more houses for the citizens but of very complete rest the work.
It is a great map in which I must highlight the inclusion of a dam for the obtaining of renewable electric energy to all citizens. In addition, the fact that the steam or smoke from the burning of garbage is recycled to generate a type of additional energy is incredibly practical, useful and intelligent. This demonstrates a serious commitment to saving and the environment. I like that a unique aspect of this map is the inclusion of an internal and external distributor, because it is useful and is a realistic way to maintain the sustainable condition of a city.
Good night. In my opinion, this idea of sustainable city contains good alternatives for its inhabitants due to its focus on caring for the environment As for the presentation we can see that the ide of sustainability is clear and evident. Laura Valentina Padilla Cordoba 10º
I think it is a very good map because besides worrying about the environment, it worries about the ambients in it, in its society and in the needs of each person, making this a map with many qualities, that besides worrying about the protection of the environment also for the stability of each of its inhabitants.
And the solar panels and a hydroelectric plant it's a interesting and important idea.
Map#5: This city is perfect, I love everything, has everything possible to live in a very healthy and peaceful environment, has everything that helps the planet and care for it, this is an ideal city, has the essential and primordial to be happy in a city where the environment is taken care of. They did a very good job, congratulations.
It's a good map They have very good ideas like the hydroelectric, it helps the people a lot and generates great economic stability. donations is a very important plan for community socal development because it helps in human integration. It would have been very good if I added More striking that attracts attention
good night I want to highlight this work without belittling others, meets the essentials for a sustainable place very clear ideas and very clear, very good work guys. they are in the park.
Hello! It seems to me that this map is quite interesting, since its proposals to improve are very viable and if they were used it would bring benefits to people
In my opinion it seems to me a very well planned and structured idea since it is based on two energies that are of very good ecological and environmental contribution to the city, which are solar panels and a hydroelectric plant.
It also calls me the idea that not solomante wants to help the environment but also to the citizens with the contribution of a foundation and with income from work, as always providing a better human quality to the inhabitants.
Another thing to discard is that the dump recycle what can be reused, and the disposable will be burned but with the care and protection of the inhabitants and the environment.
I think it is very interesting and pleasant the structure you plan and also the idea you want to show, it is clear that not everything is possible but it would be great if more movement could be implemented to benefit the environment to preserve nature and our home, besides Seeming like a motivating idea is entrepreneurial and the ideas are great.
Description: My city is distributed in offices, wind farm, processors, central power plant, community 1, community 2, storage and industrial plant. The processors are in the middle of the city and at the on the left of the processors is the wind farm. The offices are near of the wind farm and at the on the right of the offices is the community number one. The central power is behind of the processors. And between the power central and wind farm is the industrial plant. The community number two is at the on the right of central power plant and the storage is behind of the processors. If I work on the central power plant, I will cross to the community. If I had money, I would put in my city solar panels. TRIVIA: Today I am working and I need to go to my house that is in the community 1. To get I’ll take Avenue 69 to the east, and turn left after the central and I will go to the Avenue 62 in direction north. Where I am? (Nicolas Pulgarín, Gabriel Pardo, Mateo Ayure)
Map # 7. There is a bank, which helps us manage our money, control it and invest it to maintain us in a city every day; police headquarters, where the police work at the disposal of people to solve problems and secure the city; hospital, where the health of each person is monitored and cared for; apartments and houses, homes required in any city; park, where the surroundings would be taken and it is a space to relax and share; church, for the devotees to promulgate their faith; supermarket, to buy our food and care for our well-being, and finally the school where children and young people train to create a better place. If I won the lottery, I would build this city as my ideal place. If I were mayor, I would put wind power in the city. Guess: Today I was in the bank, went to the police headquarters, turned around avenue 5 and street 29, went between the church and the park, through avenue 30 half block away. Where I am now? (MArtinez Catalina, Arias Karen, Otalvaro DAvid and Padilla LAura)
Traducir Good, I think all maps propose a good environment suitable for a place very sustainable and related to the environment the map is more complete and offers a more adequate and complete, I think it is the number six meets very good requirements to have a Sustainable Place The map number seven proposes good things but I think it should be a little more complete and ample the place that they give to know proposing it
good afternoon, the idea is very good, but some descriptions are confusing and do not match, but creativity is good on the other hand The idea of sustainable city contains good alternatives for its inhabitants due to its focus on caring for the environment. It is a great map in which I must emphasize the inclusion of a dam to obtain renewable electric energy for all citizens. In addition, the fact that steam or smoke from burning garbage is recycled to generate an additional type of energy is incredibly practical, useful and intelligent.
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ReplyDeleteall the ideas of the perfect places are actually very good and are in favor of the welfare of life in community by all entities or establishments that located around the school
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ReplyDeleteThese types of drawings are very important because they contribute to the welfare of society, but it would be a good idea to add text to expand more the information
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ReplyDeleteIs exeptional his work, but in the next You should better the complexity of your map.
Thank you
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ReplyDeleteI think the ideas are very good but it would be good for the next time to improve the presentation of the map.
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ReplyDeleteThey are very good ideas, I think with a little more effort everything would be great
good morning
ReplyDeleteAll are very good ideas, whether with the aspects of sustainability, the places all make synergy for a sustainable and prosperous place
good morning all these places show the model of a prosperous city counting on aspects of sustainability for environmental care with places of interest and help for its citizens all are very good ideas that make good Union and give good results
ReplyDeleteMateo Ayure. 10
Good morning, these drawings of an ideal city in addition to being very well designed show how in the future, when it is our turn to take care of our parks and our environment, we can make decisions like using wind technology to protect our environment and help it to be more prosperous , I would like them to have more environmental points, such as wetlands, etc.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much.
Catalina Martínez - 10 °
I think it's good that we started thinking about taking care of the environment and what better way to build a sustainable city but we have to improve and think that everything we contribute to the city complement.
ReplyDeleteMaria Fernanda Gómez Aldana 10°
Good morning
ReplyDeletefor me the presentations are quite interesting because we can see how young people want to improve the world more viable than adults, but we must extend our ideals a little bit more.
Camila López 10°
I think they did a great job as it is well presented but they lack more quality in the image and directions
ReplyDeleteMap #1 Description: (Rojas Mariana, Castillo Klaus, Covezdy Ashley, Gonzalaez Dahian)
ReplyDeleteIn the Central Park there are many trees, it has garbage trashes, and there is also a lake with ducks. The park is important because it is ecological. On the roof of each house a solar panel will be installed in each house. This is important on the map because it helps to avoid the use of much electrical energy. In the hospital there is fast and good attention, healthy food many stretchers and waiting chairs
It is important because people get sick and if there is no hospital or health center, how they would be cured. Finally, in the school they would have many recycling companies; there will be good refreshment for children and they learn important habits such as recycling. If I am president, I will create a sustainable place. If I had the power of the government, I could give a good ideas to the citizens.
Guess:
we are located in protection of animals, crossing the street in front we find the underground subway station, turn to see left and continue right, then turn right and continue straight ahead, we find the hospital, which it is on the right, on the left is the central park, we move a little further and turn left we continue straight, on the right we find the shopping center and continue on, cross the street, where do we get to?
DeleteThe description is very good and appropriate.
The answer of the guess is: The school
we are in the school.
Deleteis a good trivia, a little complicated but is very good
hello, the idea is very good but it should be more concrete, a little bit of writing more in line, in the same way very good work.
Deletein solution to the trivia, according to the indications they would arrive at the school.
Nicolas Pulgarin 10°
DeleteI think they did a good job with the design of the map, what I would add would be a better description of their sustainable place that contains higher quality.
On the part of the riddle, the place you want to go to is the school, I would add names to your streets and avenues so you can better understand where you have to go, but everything else is very good.
Maria Paula Lara 10°
this excellent work,good instructions and description, your draw is very good.
Deletethe answer of the guees is the SCHOOL.
Mateo Ayure 10
good afternoon
Deletethe map has a good presentation, the trivia is easy to understand
and the address where we arrive is the school
I think it was a point in favor to have used water as a source of energy, electric cars and several points of interest and help to the community in general
Deletewe are in school
Deivid Steven Otalvaro 10°
This city has a good sustainability index, but it should have a more concrete meaning, although it is a job in which great planning is appreciated.
Deletethe answer of the Guess is that the final place is the school
duvan lis 10.
The work is very good, have good indications and is understantable.
DeleteThe place is the school.
Gabriel Pardo 10°
the indications for my is a very bad do .i see of the destination end is the school the map is good but fall river of other thing ande the describption is a good but have a prolbme orthography . i think that the work is a regular and they can do a best work
DeleteThis idea is very good only that it is not very well written, but in the rest it is fine but simple.
DeleteThe solution to the place they want to go to is the school.
Alejandro Moreno 10 °
This map is a good idea for the hydroelectric, and would be better if the protection of animals were more away from the electric car station.
DeleteAnswer: The school
You should correct as you write as it is not logical that the Central Park has base of the garbage, you should leave the Central Park has garbage because it helps us to take care of the environment, secondly it is not logical to say that you will put solar panels in each, Secondly it is not logical to say that you will put solar panels in each house if there are no houses on the map, and finally the answer to your question is that you get to school.
Deletethe description of the map is understandable and also the location of those who made the map know how to give directions and I really liked the map because it is very clear, and it is the right place to live
Deletethe description of the map is understandable and also the location of those who made the map know how to give directions and I really liked the map because it is very clear, and it is the right place to live
DeleteI liked the map very much, the idea is very interesting, it highlights many environmental values, besides highlighting the great importance for life in terms of health, besides that it also reflects the importance of studying in the school and the library. I liked the description of the map, I think that the implementation of recycling in schools is very important because it creates an awareness in students to improve environmental problems.
DeleteI think they should implement more environmental spaces such as parks or environmental centers where they can plant plants for the increase of the environment or biodivercidad. In general, I would like to live in your city, I find it attractive and it is very sustainable to live there.
good job
I would not live in this city because there is nowhere to live or there is no urbanization, there can be a variety of trade and the essentials but if there is no where to sleep I would not live there
DeleteAnswer:The School
NICK CAICEDO 11°
It seems to me an interesting proposal, both ecological and at the same time economic to a future. I think the part of the space is well located, the hydroelectric plant seems a very sustainable idea to generate energy to the citizens of a certain place.
Deletethe only thing that suggested you is that you will review your writing at the time of writing, as in the case of the word "house" being redundant.
felipe sotelo 11°
DeleteI think the idea is very good and interesting, I like that there is a hydroelectric plant that supplies renewable energy to the whole "city".
From my point of view it is smart to put a green area or park in the center of the city not only for the aesthetic but also for the advantages it brings to the citizens. Another fact that pleases me is the fact that this place uses solar energy in linking of electric energy that we know.
Juan Esteban Rivero - 11°
I think the guess is very good and simple, you are located in the school, very interesting your map and great, I really like the way you did your map and your creativity, but it should be a bit more complicated with more twists and turns. I suggest you improve your spelling
DeleteWell, I liked that map, it had good places and good structure but I realize that It has a lot of repetition, anyway I hope that you can improve in the future :)
DeleteThe map 1 is very well drawn the description is well written to the point where it indicates that each house will have a solar panel on the roof but the map does not see any normal house which presents a certain confusion between the text and the graphic everything else is fine;The riddle with the indications they give us sends to the school
DeleteSergio Bonilla 11
On the map you will find strategic and very important places whitin a city, in the description they talk about some houses with solar panels but you can not see them on the map it would be good if they can see
Deletein general is a sustainable place it is a good map only the houses are missing. Good job
My answer for the riddle is ; The school
I like that idea bacause is creative and its central topic is very understandible Ah and don't use more traductor please
DeleteI think that it is a good place to live because it has a good structure this emphasizes in the environmental care because this have a electric car station, hydroelectric and a site of animal protection.
DeleteIf i could, i will remove the store because next to it there are a mall and this have a lot to stores, and i´will remove the church because in this times is more important a scientific research center.
The answer to the guess is: school
Juan Pablo Abril 11°
observing the map and following the instructions, the school was reached.
DeleteRegarding your project is very well prepared but I think that when giving indications it should be more clear and precise.
Maria Fernanda Gómez Aldana 10°
Map #1
Deletei think that this park is good and organized, because everything is very important, it´s necessary the things he has,like the animal protection, or the hospital for the people.
i would like the library to be bigger because i really like read, and not only me, the other people when go to the libraly needed more space to read.
the answer of the trivia is: the school
Hillary Hernández~11
Map #1: On the map you can see a very good location, good places to live "well", I found it very interesting about the solar panels and the protection of animals since all this idealization is taking us more and more to what we really want like that ideal world that we all dream of.
DeleteRegarding the text and the description, it could have been a little clearer, some descriptions do not have a good wording and you do not have a bit of meaning to some things, improve that, the rest very well.
The activity of the riddle is very interesting, the place where they were is: the school.
Sofia Cagua 11º
MAP #1: The organization of the map is very well and have places that is indispensable for the city. In the ubication is importantin highlight that not good idea place a hidrohelectric next to of the school. Also is necesary that in the map be seen the things that they find in the description, but in general is a good job
DeleteThe answer of the trivia: The school
This group has very good ideas to achieve an ideal society and planet.
DeleteRegarding the graphic I think that they lacked being more explicit, because they do not show the solar panels, the trash cans and if they only show the drawing it would not be seen as an ideal place.
The answer of the guess is :
They errive at school .
Sara Moncada 11°
Hi
DeleteI agree with the idea that I like the distribution of the map, it is very good, I suppose I think it has a good wording and I think what could improve it could be a different mechanism for our advance and maintenance in the future and help to the environment and the planet for the future of the human population.
ANGELA GUIO 11°
Hello!
DeleteThe place you want to reach is the school
I seemedit very interesting, but the riddle should be a little better as the turns are not understood
Camila Lopez 10°
Well, I liked that map, it had good places and good structure but I see that the indications are not very good to get to the place and they are very tangled, but what I can tell you more or less is that you can get to school .
DeleteHi, I was a little complicated in the instructions.
DeleteBut with a little bit of concentration you can discover that the answer is school.
the description and the way to guide one is super and very appropriate
DeleteThe answer of the conjecture is: The school
I like the description is timely
Deleteand the answer is that they arrive at school
Hello it is a bit difficult to deal but according to what entendi estan in the school
DeleteThe place to where we come is the school, very well elaborated the map and the tracks were very clear.
DeleteHello
Deletearrives at school, when crossing the street, according to what he says there is
Santiago Pulido 9°
Hello !
DeleteThe perfect place is fine, but the instructions are very complicated when the answer is in the last part.
he arrives at the school, across the street, from what he says there is
Juan Maldonado ninth
¡Hello¡, the idea is very good but it should be more concrete, a little bit of writing more in line, in the same way very good work. in solution to the trivia, according to the indications they would arrive at the school.bit of writing more in line, according to the indications they would arrive at the school. Angela Peñate 9 Grade
DeleteMap #2 DESCRIPTION: In the center of our sector is the solar system, on the right, crossing the 32 avenue is the Nestor Forero school, one block above is the police station, and below the school is the public urbanization , following the 12 street is the garbage treatment plant, and by the same street and crossing the 23 avenue is the university. At the end, the public forest, and straight following the 12 Street is the food center.
ReplyDeleteTrivia: Today I will go to the supermarket, from there I will go to greet some friends in the police next door. I have to get to meet my friends in the place, which is passing by the south of the school and going east through the hospital. Do you know what place it is? (By Garcia Luisa, Sanagria Cesar . Gutierrez Laura and Suarez Carlos)
The map is very good and understandable
DeleteThe answer of the trivia is:University
Is Sanabria,Don´t Sanagria :v
the place is the park, in complicated see the place because the map has not directions in this
DeleteI think that all the elements of the map make a synergy that helps the environment in terms of care
DeleteI'm in the garbage treatment plant
deivid steven otalvaro 10°
good job. with good drawings and good map, but it is recommended to put the streets and avenues with their names since in the description they are but in the map noy
Deletein the second map is not so clear because it looks very close to everything, they lack more order and location and environmental spaces, the rest is well the description of the map is what they need is to locate the places better
DeleteIt may be a good idea to the post of each site, but the ortografia and the indications are not very clear.
DeleteAnswer: University
First of all in the tracks should be more coherent since they are not very logical the tracks to part of that are very tangled to understand them and one is lost when to solve the tracks where we arrived, but however one can understand little , you should practice a little more reaction in order to understand it and the answer to the ultimate is that you get to college
Deletethe map is very basic, very common. I think the ideas are very good, but they should be a bit more creative and create a more environmental and urban city with more striking sectors. In general, it's not a bad idea, but I think the ideas are not very specific.
DeleteIn my opinion, they should create more green plants and fewer plants, implement values such as respect for the land, plants and animals, and be more aware of what people would like to have in a city.
very good work
Personally I would live there since there is an urbanization and it is the essential thing, but it needs a place of pets, besides it is badly written:
DeleteIt is not "vegetable waste treatment"
if it is "garbage treatment plant"
Answer: University
NICK CAICEDO 11 °
I do not think it is a proposal that is very related to the ecological or environmental, since I only see a green area.
Deletein the part of the track I would suggest that you had a little more consistency at the time of writing, the rest is very good.
felipe sotelo 11°
DeleteI think it's a really interesting map, it's easy to understand and it covers a wide variety of different facilities.
From my point of view, it is very good, useful and intelligent to add a plant for the treatment of water and a plant for the specialized treatment of waste.
I also like that the design of the map revolves around the hospital, that is, that the hospital for its usefulness is the center from my point of view the only regular thing is that you do not know the roads very well, it would be better to make a small change in the sizes and make it more realistic, the rest is perfect.
Juan Esteban Rivero - 11°
Hello, the work is fine, but it is incomplete since it does not have the cardinal points placed so that one can be guided.
DeleteGabriel Pardo 10°
Hello, I think it was a good job because it is related to the environment, but on the map there are no avenues or streets.
DeleteMateo Ayure 10°
the map has good sustainability elements but it would be good if you also had the streets and avenues to make it more complete
DeleteMaria Fernanda Gómez Aldana 10°
Goodnight
DeleteI think the map has a good presentation but should put streets and avenues since the map is not highlighted cardinal points and so it would be easier to locate.
Laura Valentina Padilla Cordoba 10º
Map #2
DeleteI think this map is very basic, you can understand things more easily, that's true, but I think it lacks more color, more life, more beautiful things to do in this place,more green,and coherent directions, that are not written.
Besides all these things, the rest can be easier to understand, unlike many maps, since there is almost no creativity.
The answer of the trivia: University
Hillary Hernández~11♡
Map #2: the description of the map with the image does not match very well, it makes sense some things or coherence with what is describing and the image, could improve that. Something very good that I did not see in the previous map is the urbanization, the houses, buildings and others, which makes it a much better place to live. I like to highlight the environment because without it we could not live.
Deleteyou could add it to your "city" shopping center or places for the care of animals, as veterinarians, it is the only thing that would be missing, the rest is fine, I liked it.
The place where it is: the university
Sofia Cagua 11º
Good job. with good drawings and good map, but it is recommended to put the streets and avenues with their names since in the description they are but in the map no, and is important to get better the orthography in the description and in the trivia
DeleteThe answer of the trivia: The university
It is a good drawing but it is not complete. Missing street names, drawing roads and not describing an ideal place.
DeleteI would recommend that you try to go deeper into the drawing and use more the imagination.
The answer of the trivia is :
They are in the university
Sara Moncada 11°
Hi
DeleteI really like this map it seems to have good potential but maybe it is necessary to polish some insignificant things but if important I think that they should improve the way they explain things in the description something more descriptive.
ANGELA GUIO 11°
DeleteI like this map but I think it lacks signage and it is not clear which streets and avenues I think the map is very simple.
The answer is : Garbage treatment plant
I liked your map, very didactic and very good the riddle, but you should improve a little more the city, the environment, but you should add more things, like a river, that is not so industrial
DeleteAndres Trapues 11 °
hello, interesting your work very well, but the map does not have the cardinal points nor the directions mentioned in the trivia, just that observation.
DeleteNicolas pulgarin 10º
Hello
Deletethe place where you are in the university, i seemed an interesting trivia, although the drawing should have more streets
Thank you
Camila Lopez 10 °
I do not think it is a proposal that is very related to the ecological or environmental, since I only see a green area.
Deletein the part of the track I would suggest that you had a little more consistency at the time of writing, the rest is very good.
Answer : University
Angela Peñate 9 Grade
Deletereally the way to guide it is a very simple and it is not that you understand much the riddle
in the place that this is the university
Hello !
Deletefriends the description is wrong because it names a logar that does not exist and guesses it also because it is relative is not concrete because it is where we want to see the south or the west through a person and if it is through the place I do not block greetings! if it were west it would be the university
it's a bit confusing but the answer is the university
DeleteThe place in which we are is in the university, I recommend for the next time the text and the tracks are more clear.
DeleteWell the map is very good and only has one error in the description that says "In the center of our sector is the solar system" and obviously there is no solar system, others are very happy.
DeleteAnswer: University.
Hello, I think the map has requirements to create an ideal place, the description is good, it is clear and it is understood
Deletesantiago pulido 9 °
the map is well done but the description is somewhat confusing
DeleteWE ARE IN THE SCHOOL
ReplyDeletethe first map seems good because it has great sustainability but I think that being an ideal place there should be no aggression to the animals and therefore there would not be a center of protection since there would be no...
ReplyDeletein the second map it seems to me that it was a great idea but for the same reason, if it is a sustainable place, the garbage appears in the water and it seems that something is needed to get the food like a farm orchard or something similar
ReplyDeleteI think the map is very well made, it has everything that I think an ideal city should have, and the design is very varied, except my name.
ReplyDeleteIf the place is the university
DeleteMaP #3 DESCRIPTION In the center of my perfect city is located a wetland where there is a large number of species and it is used as a water accumulation zone avoiding flooding. To the north of the wetland there are houses and buildings with large windows to let natural light in and avoiding the consumption of energy. On the left is the school where they teach the importance of recycling and caring the environment. In front of the school there is a store sale of bicycles which help to reduce levels of contamination of air and environment. To the left, there are crops of fruits and vegetables where you do not use pesticides or herbicides for your crops and will not contribute the contamination to air and water to the left of the crops there is a store so that in houses and stores it is counted and regulated the consumption of water. Next to, is the classification of trash that prevents soil contamination and does not produce and die plants and animals in front is the stationery that helps us recycle and finally to the left of the stationery is a park with many trees that purify the air, absorbs carbon dioxide and protects the soil from erosion. If I could made my own city, I would favor the environment and If I go to the sale of bicycles, I will find bicycles that help the environment.
ReplyDeleteYesterday my friends Lucia Fonseca, Maria Fernanda Gomez and Camila Lopez and I were in a place ¡GUESS WHERE!
We take following indications: First were in the school and decided to go to the place, in front of the school is a sale of bicycles, we crossed the Avenue 24 and we arrived at the Wetland and across the Street Fire to the east crossing the Avenue 36 is the Trash Classification, in front was the house of a friend, we went up to take a juice and when going down we crossed by the Street LM and then by the Avenue 48 to arrive at the Stationery and finally to cross by the Street 76 to arrive at our destiny.
I think a good city because it is very ecological to the health of all who lived in it preventing many diseases in our body, is a very, perhaps and the best thing is to improve a bit the wording or suddenly more fixed in the mistakes that makes the Translator because although it is understood it produces a bit of confusion, with some words out of context, but I think it is a very good idea.
DeleteOn the other hand the answer to the place that is reached is to the park
I liked the map, it is very original and creative, it has many environmental complements that are very ecological and good for the environment. It is a very equitable city and highlights many values that emphasize the care and protection of nature.
DeleteWithout a doubt, living in this city is a good proposal, because it is a very pleasant and peaceful place to live.
Congratulations, good work
I liked
DeleteIn my opinion it seems to me that the ecological infrastructural part is well formed, has very good ideas to prevent pollution, and other ecological factors. There is also something to recognize is that it avoids the use of electronic energy, like the advantage of placing large windows.
also in the health aspect as the use of bicycles for a better physical condition and avoid the use of cars.
I really liked this urbanization proposal.
felipe sotelo 11°
DeleteI find this map really interesting and really impressive.
I have to repeat again that it is impressive because I think it is very well thought out, not only the general location of everything, but also the size of each installation is proportional to its importance and the size they would have in reality.
from my point of view it complies with everything to be a perfect city, (it has a waste treatment plant, a park, a large green area, a school, the normal urbanization, etc.); I very much agree with the addition of a cultivation field and a huge bicycle shop with the objective of helping the environment, the only thing is that if there is a large bicycle shop there must also be a large "bicycle parking lot", I just think that's missing, -the rest is perfect and I definitely would like to live in this city.
Juan Esteban Rivero - 11°
Goodnight
DeleteThe ideas of sustainability in this city are quite good and interesting because if such a city existed it would be where we would all like to live
As for the presentation, it seems to me that it is very clear and very pleasing to the eye
Laura Valentina Padilla Cordoba 10º
Map #3
DeleteI think this is the best map,i do not know where to start, it has an incredible organization and creativity, they are very aware of the environmental, they care a lot about caring, recycle, and save in every way, the people who created this map thought of absolutely everything that is needed. in a city truly, being so creative and coherent in every way.
They thought about the need for the environmental and how they could help by converting useful things to improve the quality of life.
Congratulations guys!
Hillary Hernández~11
Map #3: Living in this city catches my attention because they focus a lot on the ecology, on the environment, that gives me to understand how very important the environment is for this city, they focus a lot on this and that it makes it a nice and cozy place, it has everything to live very quiet. It is definitely a perfect city.
DeleteSofia Cagua 11º
MAP #3: i think is very well the size of each part of the city, is proportional to its importance. Also is important highlight that the ubication of the elemts of the city is very good made and in a sustainable way, although missing places indispencible in a city
DeleteThis map is excellent.
DeleteI believe that it has all the requirements to create an ideal place, where the biodiversity, care and quality of each natural installation is reflected.
They use imagination and fantasy a lot and that is very important for a generation which should be in charge of caring and forming an ideal world.
Sara Moncada 11
Hi I like this map I like the idea of having areas of fauna and flora like the wetland that is in the center of the city
DeleteI like that it has a way of looking for saving energy and consumption to use only what is necessary, taking advantage of the day and enjoying the night in its nature
has great initiative I think it could serve to help a have a healthy future and maybe recover extinct species or at least improve the lives of all inhabitants.
I like that it recycles that looks for the way to educate people so that they can recycle and be aware of the damage caused by not doing so.
¡CONGRATULATIONS FOR YOUR JOB !!!
ANGELA GUIO 11 °
The map has a good design, good color, and creative.
DeleteIts easy reed it and find the adresses. Good Job it is my favorite map
The answer is school
This map is very interesting. It has a river with more color it will be better. its easy find the adresses and the places.
DeleteI liked your map, very didactic and very good guess, but you should improve the city a bit more, and you should have an order for the letters of the buildings, so that you can read more easily
DeleteAndres Trapues 11 °
Goodnight.
Deleteexcellent work, very well developed colleagues very easy to understand clearly enough that creates interest in the, very good work.
According to the indications, they would arrive at the park.
Nicolas pulgarin 10º
¡Hello¡ I Think That East Map Has The Requirements To create An Ideal Place, Don of There is Many Biological Diversity Since This Is Too important For The World, I Like The Description Since It Is Clear And Concise, It is Very natural And Essential.
DeleteAngela Peñate 9 Grade .
they arrive at the building as they cross 76th Street
Deletethe map is not very compressible but the answer is to the place that is reached is to the park
DeleteHello, I think the map has requirements to create an ideal place, the description is good, it is clear and it is understood
Deletesantiago pulido 9 °
It seems to me that the map this one very well done, the text this one argued well and the clear tracks, good work.
DeleteI really liked the map and the directions given to get to the right place
DeleteThey arrived at the building on 76th Street
in the second is at the university where you will see them
ReplyDeleteThe description is too long but is good
ReplyDeleteThe answer of the trivia is:The park
Map # 4. DESCRIPTION: The river cross all the city, it has a purifier so you obtain clean water. The hydroelectric installation is the place to create electricity through water. There are 4 principal avenues, 2 streets and 2 carrers too. There is a school: Néstor Forero Alcalá for secondary and primary students.
ReplyDeleteQuitian Church is a place where the people come to redeem and convert themselves. Also there are some houses for the families and a commercial zone: The Eden, where you can sale a lot of things. In the park the kids play and there are some shops for sale less things. Finally, there is a pool for refreshing when it is warmer. If the hydroelectric installation broke, we could die. And the pool will dry, if the sun shines a lot.
Trivia: I was to the pool, I cross the street 1, I was in the Quitian church and to the south I cross the carrer 2, where I am? (Nicolas Quitian, Giovanny Manrique, Duvan Lis and Nicolas Garcia)
DeleteIt seems to me that you have the idea of making an ecological city, but there is something that I would recommend as the writing, there are parts in which one can be confused as the moment you finish the description.
As you say it is a place that is hot I would recommend that you put solar panels in the school and in the houses and thus you would have more ecology contribution.
felipe sotelo 11°
It is a good proposal
Deletebut I think they should have added more things related to the environment such as parks, hospitals and schools that encourage more than sports.
it is very reflected the importance for the citizens who live there and there is a lot of respect for water and that is very important because it highlights a very good job.
in general a good jo
I think it seems a good city, very easy to understand others that there is good wording and would be a good future city, but you should correct some errors in the translation of some words such as "career" that translated something wrong as it says "career "Instead of saying run that symbolizes career of an address or avenue, because carer refers more than everything to a profession, I find it very good writing and creativity to think of an ideal city
DeleteThe answer to the question is that you get to the community
DeleteIt is a good map. I think it's really interesting that the design of this city is based around water, that is, that the central structure of the city is based on following the river as it was in ancient architecture.
It is intelligent to take advantage of the passage of the river to obtain energy from it with the hydroelectric plant. something to highlight this map unlike the previous ones is that it has a pool, which, although it seems simple, means that the city, besides being friendly with the environment, besides worrying about the utility, also worries about the entertainment of its citizens all because the life of the people are not routine and that is something important in reality and that is good to implement in a city.
Juan Esteban Rivero - 11°
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DeleteIn my opinion the ideas of a sustainable city are quite good but it lacks more detail in the presentation of the drawing.
Map #4
DeleteI think I liked this map but I think it lacks a bit of organization and creativity, more conscience for the plants, it's a very good idea when talking about : " The hydroelectric installation is the place to create electricity through water".I think it's really interesting, but I think it's lacked more life.
The answer of the trivia: You get to the community.
Hillary Hernández~11
Map #4: I like it, just that you should add a park or something with a green area due to the great importance that you have of the environment, remove the pool and put the park as it is much more primordial. I like the water purifier because in this way we would get clean and healthy water for the human being.
Deletevery well done.
Sofia Cagua 11º
MAP #4: Is a map interesting and have an good organization, but lack much creativity and objectivity for an city that really be sustainable. Although have good ideas as get energy for through of the water, have to give importance to elements that are need for have an city sustainable
DeleteThe answer of the trivia: the nestor forero alcala
DeleteIn my opinion it is a map with good intentions, where they give to understand the integrity of a partnership, but it would be very good to give it more color because it is off and does not attract attention.
The idea of the river is very good because it satisfies a life healthy and permanence.
Sara Moncada 11
I liked your map, very didactic and very good guess, but you should improve the city a bit more, and you should have an order for the letters of the buildings, so that you can read more easily, and put the river around the city and not from
DeleteAndres Trapues 11 °
Hello, in my opinion and with all due respect the map is a bit opaque, lack of commitment in the organization and dedication to the part of creativity and design, in the same way all very well, good work.
DeleteNicolas pulgarin 10º.
in solution to the trivia you are in the community
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DeleteI think its description is very interesting, it is quite sustainable, but it should improve a bit the map's preference when colors and streets
Thank you
Camila Lopez 10 °
you are in the community but the same is relative depending on the point of view where you see the cardinal points
Deletethe answer to the riddle is you get to the community
DeleteHello I think that his description is interesting, but I do not like me the style of the map as for colors and local locations it should improve a bit
DeleteAnswer : You get to the community.
Angela Peñate 9°
comes to the community, this description is good, but the drawing could improve a lot more, and be better
DeleteSantiago Pulido 9°
Map # 5: In our sustainable place we decided to have a dam to work as a source of energy, since we have a large park with a hydroelectric plant accompanied by a farm which gives us the big part of food to support the inhabitants, we have a distributor and donor company , it helps us to distribute all the producers both internal and external and the visitors can bring clothes or furniture that they no longer use in good condition to donate them, we have a medical center, a police station and a large school with green bells and a shopping center for to be able to have sustainability and jobs. Our homes and apartments have solar panels to create their own energy with small stores. Finally, we have our garbage dump which is friendly to the environment because it separates all the recycling and burns the garbage from specialized places which treats the air so that it does not contaminate. If we burn the garbage and recycle the steam with turbines we can generate energy, and we will help the planet more. Also, if I use solar energy, I will take more care of the environment and save more money.
ReplyDeleteGuess: This morning we stayed with my friends, I left my house and I crossed 96th Street to meet one of my friends to go together. She lives in a group of apartments, then we crossed in front of the hospital, we went through the farm to see the animals, then we went through the park, at the top we crossed by the May 17 Avenue, we passed the police station and arrived. The trash can is on top of us. Where we are? (By Maria Paula Lara, Alejandro Moreno and Santiago Mora)
it's a good job
DeleteIn my opinion, I think it's a very elaborate map, it has everything a sustainable city requires, I like it because it reflects the importance of life and the respect it should have.
It is seen that there are many places for people with problems and that is very good as well as the implementation of environmental resources. It is a city that would undoubtedly live there.
Congratulations, good work
I think it's a very good idea, it's a good city apart from that there is a lot of creativity you can see the effort of the group and teamwork, besides it is a good city in the part of that was thought of everything, in the distribution companies , recyclers, on farms that serve as a great help to maintain the city with regard to food, I also find it good the mall to generate the employment of citizens as well as other companies;I think they should put a little more houses for the citizens but of very complete rest the work.
DeleteVery good teamwork, I liked
It is a great map in which I must highlight the inclusion of a dam for the obtaining of renewable electric energy to all citizens.
DeleteIn addition, the fact that the steam or smoke from the burning of garbage is recycled to generate a type of additional energy is incredibly practical, useful and intelligent. This demonstrates a serious commitment to saving and the environment.
I like that a unique aspect of this map is the inclusion of an internal and external distributor, because it is useful and is a realistic way to maintain the sustainable condition of a city.
Juan Esteban Rivero - 11°
Good night.
DeleteIn my opinion, this idea of sustainable city contains good alternatives for its inhabitants due to its focus on caring for the environment
As for the presentation we can see that the ide of sustainability is clear and evident.
Laura Valentina Padilla Cordoba 10º
Map #5
DeleteI think it is a very good map because besides worrying about the environment, it worries about the ambients in it, in its society and in the needs of each person, making this a map with many qualities, that besides worrying about the protection of the environment also for the stability of each of its inhabitants.
And the solar panels and a hydroelectric plant it's a interesting and important idea.
Hillary Hernández~11
Map#5: This city is perfect, I love everything, has everything possible to live in a very healthy and peaceful environment, has everything that helps the planet and care for it, this is an ideal city, has the essential and primordial to be happy in a city where the environment is taken care of.
DeleteThey did a very good job, congratulations.
Sofia Cagua 11º
DeleteIt's a good map
They have very good ideas like the hydroelectric, it helps the people a lot and generates great economic stability.
donations is a very important plan for community socal development because it helps in human integration.
It would have been very good if I added More striking that attracts attention
Sara Moncada 11
This map has estetic and creative. It is colored and organized is easy look and read the signalin.
DeleteIs a susteinable place Good job
good night I want to highlight this work without belittling others, meets the essentials for a sustainable place very clear ideas and very clear, very good work guys.
Deletethey are in the park.
Nicolas pulgarin 10º
Hello!
DeleteIt seems to me that this map is quite interesting, since its proposals to improve are very viable and if they were used it would bring benefits to people
Very good job, thanks
Camila Lopez 10 °
they are in the mall since the dumpster is on top
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Deletethe map is compressible and the answer is in the park
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion it seems to me a very well planned and structured idea since it is based on two energies that are of very good ecological and environmental contribution to the city, which are solar panels and a hydroelectric plant.
It also calls me the idea that not solomante wants to help the environment but also to the citizens with the contribution of a foundation and with income from work, as always providing a better human quality to the inhabitants.
Another thing to discard is that the dump recycle what can be reused, and the disposable will be burned but with the care and protection of the inhabitants and the environment.
felipe sotelo 11°
Good Morning
ReplyDeleteThese drawings seem very important to me because they are in favor of well-being, the places that I like very much for establishments.
I think it is very interesting and pleasant the structure you plan and also the idea you want to show, it is clear that not everything is possible but it would be great if more movement could be implemented to benefit the environment to preserve nature and our home, besides Seeming like a motivating idea is entrepreneurial and the ideas are great.
ReplyDeleteDescription: My city is distributed in offices, wind farm, processors, central power plant, community 1, community 2, storage and industrial plant. The processors are in the middle of the city and at the on the left of the processors is the wind farm. The offices are near of the wind farm and at the on the right of the offices is the community number one. The central power is behind of the processors. And between the power central and wind farm is the industrial plant. The community number two is at the on the right of central power plant and the storage is behind of the processors. If I work on the central power plant, I will cross to the community. If I had money, I would put in my city solar panels.
ReplyDeleteTRIVIA: Today I am working and I need to go to my house that is in the community 1. To get I’ll take Avenue 69 to the east, and turn left after the central and I will go to the Avenue 62 in direction north. Where I am? (Nicolas Pulgarín, Gabriel Pardo, Mateo Ayure)
Map # 7. There is a bank, which helps us manage our money, control it and invest it to maintain us in a city every day; police headquarters, where the police work at the disposal of people to solve problems and secure the city; hospital, where the health of each person is monitored and cared for; apartments and houses, homes required in any city; park, where the surroundings would be taken and it is a space to relax and share; church, for the devotees to promulgate their faith; supermarket, to buy our food and care for our well-being, and finally the school where children and young people train to create a better place. If I won the lottery, I would build this city as my ideal place. If I were mayor, I would put wind power in the city.
ReplyDeleteGuess: Today I was in the bank, went to the police headquarters, turned around avenue 5 and street 29, went between the church and the park, through avenue 30 half block away. Where I am now? (MArtinez Catalina, Arias Karen, Otalvaro DAvid and Padilla LAura)
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ReplyDeleteGood, I think all maps propose a good environment suitable for a place very sustainable and related to the environment the map is more complete and offers a more adequate and complete, I think it is the number six meets very good requirements to have a Sustainable Place
The map number seven proposes good things but I think it should be a little more complete and ample the place that they give to know proposing it
ReplyDeletegood afternoon, the idea is very good, but some descriptions are confusing and do not match, but creativity is good on the other hand
The idea of sustainable city contains good alternatives for its inhabitants due to its focus on caring for the environment. It is a great map in which I must emphasize the inclusion of a dam to obtain renewable electric energy for all citizens.
In addition, the fact that steam or smoke from burning garbage is recycled to generate an additional type of energy is incredibly practical, useful and intelligent.